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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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It can be seen dramatically criminals do crimes again after releasing from lockup. The main reasons to do so are lack of professional skills taught to offenders and jobs which lead them to crimes again.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons and solutions to overcome the case rate in the world. Mainly criminals offend crimes
second time
Suggestion
a second time
 after completing their
first
 punishment due to several factors.
Firstly they
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Firstly, they
 kept in prison with different offenders and they learn new ways of felons
instead
 of learning professional work. They should be taught working skills so they can get task after completing their tenure from prison.
Secondly when
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Secondly, when
 they finish their sentence and go back to the society they have a lack of resources to raise their family and they have no business which forces them to do crimes again. If they learn some professional skills during their period of punishment and get a suitable career after releasing from jail, we can reduce the crime rate in the community and it will be helpful for the growth of the economy.
However
 the situation is still not out of our hand, if we monitor the activity of offenders after finished their
first
 punishment, it will help them to analyse the daily routine of criminals.
Secondly if
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Secondly, if
 the government helps them to learn skills and give them suitable jobs after releasing from confinement,
as a result
 the evil rates will reduce and people can live peacefully. To conclude, people do crimes again and again due to many reasons which is harmful for the civilization as well for a country
also
,
However by
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However, by
 following some basic steps we can easily overcome the crime rates and save the nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recidivism
  • rehabilitation programs
  • social stigma
  • ex-convicts
  • reintegration
  • support systems
  • mental health issues
  • addiction problems
  • criminal networks
  • incarceration
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