Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome

Many countries around the world facing different problems. Some are going through from environmental issues and many countries are
deal
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dealing
with the
education
or population related problem. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss the problem which
be
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is
is being
harmful for our
country
and
also
provide some suggestion to tackle those issues.
Firstly
,
Education
is the major problem in many
countries specially
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countries, especially
countries especially
in underdeveloped countries. Since, those countries have financial problems due to which they are unable to promote their
education
. Another reason is that they unaware the benefits of
education
. They
does stop
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do stop
are stopping
their children to go school. And put their children in shops for earning money.
On the other hand
,
population
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the population
become
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becomes
is becoming
increasing day by day.Many people are unemployment. Due to
this
, they
have live
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have lived
their life in homes without any work. As earlier said that underdeveloped countries have
facing
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faced
problems related to money. So, increase number in population will
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the
country
financially issues.
Therefore
, those people do not want their children to study and be educated. Many underdeveloped
countries
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countries'
government
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governments
are not that much active to improve their problems. The
first
step that government should take is to educate their youth. Since, young people
have get
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have got
have gotten
good
education
and get major
skills
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skills, then
then
it will be beneficial for
country's future
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the country's future
.
Otherwise
, it will be difficult to
developed
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develop
your
country
and become powerful to fight in tough times. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would say that
education
is the major power to tackle all the minor problems in the
country
.
Government
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The government
should impose
education
on
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of
for
to
every child it should be compulsory for everyone to educate their children.
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