In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
In the contemporary world,
crime
Suggestion
the crime rate
rate
has been increasing in certain countries when compared to a decade ago. This
is owing to the fact that the reduction in income opportunities, the crime
rate
has been increasing. This
essay will, firstly
discuss about the main reasons of crime
and secondly
, about the solution for the causes, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin
with, with the improvements in technology, the literacy
rate
has been increased over the past 10 years. With the increase in literacy
rate
, number of people are graduating every year. Due to the lack of jobs for the graduated students, they are involved in crimes either intentionally or unintentionally, in order to survive. For example
, in India, in order to increase literacy
rate
, the government has waived tuition fee for some undergraduate students and as a result
, 5 Lakh of students are graduating and almost 4 Lakh students are jobless every year. Hence
, they turn out to be thieves or join gangsters to earn money. So, crime
Suggestion
the crime rate
rate
has been increasing tremendously over the past few years.
However
, with necessary actions of the government, this
issue can be eradicated to some extent. With cheaper education, the literacy
rate
increases, but it is also
necessary to provide job opportunities for those students. It is better to evaluate which field requires more graduates and accordingly
the tuition fee is to be reduced or waived off for those fields. For instance
, in India, the demand for doctors has been increasing, but doctor course is very costly, so many people are not choosing to become doctors rather they are turning out to be engineers because of the very less tuition fee and becoming jobless, as there is huge competition for engineers in the market.
To conclude, with the increase in competition in the market, many people are becoming jobless every year. However
, with proper analysis by the government, most of the students can get jobs which can ultimately reduce the crime
rate
in any country.Submitted by Harika Madala on
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