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Some poeple believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, businees and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays the free
knowledge
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 has become more widespread, since the Internet invention, that has allowed a lot of information to be freely accessible and available. To
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 extent, some people consider an advantage to have
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 possibility, while others deem the
knowledge
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 shouldn't be freely shared for its importance. I partially agree with the
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 point of view and in
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 essay I will suggest some food for thoughts. One of the main reasons to share the
knowledge
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 is that it could be fundamental to clarify some hidden and obscure issues for the whole world. What I mean is that in the scientific research,
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, it is important to perfectly know what has been already discovered, in order to keep up with modern problems and invest time and efforts in more useful ideas. Another major concern is that everyone can access it and in many cases
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 would help in prompting new ideas. Let's think of the business world; if new discoveries are revealed, more modern policies could be tested.
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,
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 freedom could not be
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 for the one directly involved in
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 discoveries. As an example, if new ideas are freely shared, someone else could make them better and gain higher profits, without any intellectual effort. To sum up, the free share is a good way to enlarge the worldwide
knowledge
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, but on the other side, it might reveal drawbacks for the ones directly involved in research. I personally believe that a better balance should be found, maybe helping to patent ideas, in order to protect them the best.
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