Question: In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer companies are leaving their countries for developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?
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countries
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I will shed some light on the consequences of their migration and suggest some possible Add a comma
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solution
for Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
this
burning issue. Firstly
, proficient persons are trying to move from their developing or underdeveloped homes for better wages and living standards. A recent study of migration revels
that , Correct your spelling
reveals
plethora
of Indian doctors, engineers and IT professionals are trying for citizenship and permanent residential status in Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
well developed
nations Add a hyphen
well-developed
such
as UK
, Europe and Canada. Correct article usage
the UK
This
is all because of better
salary range and recognition they will get in those places. The consequences of these transfers Add an article
the better
is
high, as the developing nations Change the verb form
are
loosing
the skilled ones, they will Verb problem
lose
keep
remain developing only. Verb problem
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This
can lead to decline
in Add an article
a decline
economy
. If the teachers migrate from the developing Add an article
the economy
countries
, who will teach the children and how can they become skilled professionals? And in
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such
cases, they may have to seek foreign aids
, which can Fix the agreement mistake
aid
also
add up to burden
of their financial crisis. When Bangladesh was in need of foreign help, it pulled them Add an article
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into
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a
huge
debt. Providing better living conditions and high Correct article usage
a huge
salary
as per their education and experience are the solutions for Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
this
issue, which can reduce a considerate
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with their profiles, they would not leave their native places. Change preposition
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MOREOVER
, Creating more employment opportunities and better
living atmosphere are the solutions. Inviting foreign investments can create Correct article usage
a better
the
job openings. Accepting and adopting technologies can improve Correct article usage
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the
living standards. Correct article usage
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For example
, some schools in India have implemented the technology of modern teaching and turned the classrooms in
modern labs, which has created a plethora of job opportunities. Change preposition
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To conclude
, draining
of skilled Correct article usage
the draining
person
from Fix the agreement mistake
people
under
developing and developing Change preposition
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countries
will leave the nation in darkness. The officials will have to take action for migration in a way which is beneficial for both the professionals as well as
the economy. Adequate endeavour for this
ablaze are
creating work and providing proper salary in accordance with their experience. I hope in future there will be a stage where no one Change the verb form
is
have
to leave their hometowns, for job search and quality life. Except for some kind of emergency.Change the verb form
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