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It is too expensive to look after and repair old building. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#repair #money #buildings
This
 world is changing rapidly as we pass year after year, things are transforming on a high speed through technology and advancement. The world is becoming progressively so old
infrastructure
 need
repair
 and maintenance,
however
 development of new
infrastructure
 is
also
 necessary for the
growth
 if the
country
. In below paragraph, I am going to discuss both sides, about
repair
 of building and expenses on new building. Our
government
 always tries to take steps in the
growth
 and development of the
country
,
Therefore
,
government
 support for modernization of the
country
 by spending
money
 on modern buildings with advance technology and facility,
This
 will help in
country
growth
 as it will create new job opportunities and development of living standard.
This
 will
also
 help the economic
growth
 of
country
 as new office building will be built with latest technology. It's good to spend
money
 on
infrastructure
 by building modern buildings up to a certain limit.If
government
Suggestion
the government
 only focuses on modernization
then
 that
country
 will lost its ancient
infrastructure
 and its old identity.
Therefore
government
Suggestion
the government
 should focus on
repair
 of old buildings, so that they can save their cultural heritage along with modern buildings. As we all know with time, change is important,
however with
Accept comma addition
however, with
 change maintenance of old things is
also
 necessary for our memories. To conclude, I would say
government
Suggestion
the government
 should spend
money
 in a balanced form on both the things. Building new buildings is necessary up to some extent and
repair
 and maintenance
also
 should be taken care alongside. Spending too much
money
 on one side is not worth full.
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