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Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the class in the class room. Do you agree with this statement ? what is an alternative to traditional face -to- face teaching?

#intelligence #teachers #class #room #alternative #face #-to-
Self learning computer will replace teachers in the future. I surely agree
this
 statement because of advancement of technology and the best alternative to traditional teaching would be creating designed course on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 by the instructors. Computer scientists are creating computer programs with artificial intelligence (AI) due to availability to more sophisticated equipments.
This
 new revolution in the programs
,
Accept space
,
 now can create the robots or any softwares to do humans like task. Japan
,
Accept space
,
for example
,
Accept space
,
 has a hotel robots who does the job of
waiter
Suggestion
a waiter
. Only by the use of
internet
 and preparing a new teaching course on the
internet
, traditional teachers can save their jobs. The use of
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 is high and the students
eagerly are
Suggestion
are eagerly
 waiting for the content. So providing them the knowledge they need through
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 can bring revolution in teaching methods.
For example
, there are thousands of students learning from the online platform called Udemy. To conclude, the online learning and teaching method by creating needed course is the best alternate to traditional teaching
otherwise
, for sure, AI will
takeover
Suggestion
take over
 educators.
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