Task 2: In some countries the average weight of people is increasing, and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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Nowadays, several nations facing problem with rapidly growing obesity among citizens,

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the physical

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of people are declining. I totally agree with the given statement,

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phenomenon is increasing consumption of fast food, Because the fast food, mostly contain fat and oil which may increase fatness in the human body.

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, People may use mostly their leisure time to shop and socializing application on the internet.

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, advancement in the technology makes a person's life comfortable,

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they want they can buy from online.

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as, clothes, Household accessories so on.

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, Due to the advance machinery peoples do less physical work in comparing to the past.Now, everything would be done by just a click of one button.

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, to overcome from

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situation all elementary schools should have to add physical

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as compulsory subject.

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, the government should make some campaign to aware citizen regarding fitness.

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, authorities should build some Public parks and sports centres,

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, people may do some physical activities.

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, To maintain physical

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of the citizens, The government of India starts Physical training as subject in primary school. In conclusion, I reiterate that Physical

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is an important part of life to stay active in

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competitive life.

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can be solved if both government and citizen both take some valuable measurements towards

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary
obesity
overweight
physical activity
sedentary lifestyle
exercise
unhealthy diet
fast food
urbanization
modernization
stress
awareness
education
government intervention
policies
promotion
sports
fitness programs
health education
taxation
public transportation
infrastructure
parks
recreational spaces

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