The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The Nuclear weapon is very important to maintain peace and harmony
this
day as the world know about its consequence. And on the flip side same source of
energy
can be utilized to full fill the need of
energy
. As the nuclear
energy
can produce an enormous amount of power and cheap compare to other source of
energy
. I totally agree that Nuclear
energy
is very important for our lives. Since the industrial revolution started need for
energy
is continuously increasing day by day and to fulfil that need we have limited resources like coal, gas, petroleum and wood. But they are non-renewable resources and some renewable resources we have like solar, wind and geothermal
energy
are very few. So Nuclear
energy
is the only option to pace with the demanding needs. Compare to coal or gas same amount of uranium can produce million times more
energy
and it is not producing any harmful gases like CO2
,
Accept space
,
NO2, NO etc.(Which are greenhouse gases helping with rising the temperature of the whole world and because of them seasons are
also
uneven).
this
Suggestion
This
is just a nuclear fission process. Nowadays scientist is developing nuclear fission process for having more clean
energy
. There are some drawbacks of nuclear
energy
which produces it harmful radioactive waste which should be very carefully disposed under the ground. So it is contaminating the ground and ground water resources as well. From our past experience during WWII, we are very familiar with the destructive power of the Atom-bomb. Some countries are using that as a threat to others. Like North Korea. But, they all know the consequences will affect them
also
so it is not a big threat like Green house effect. In conclusion, I have strongly believed that our main enemy is the greenhouse effect for all mankind, it has to be stopped or there will be very harsh results of that. So, for me, I support nuclear
energy
as it is clean and its drawbacks can be controlled easily. We can produce and use nuclear power for our better future and for our environment. It is a very famous idiom that " build Dam Before Flood".
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