In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

Decide whether to work or go to the university will can challenge all of the students. Some countries which purpose working or travelling a as an option people who graduated from university
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before they continue
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studies.
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However, there
are some positive facts for a person to whether have travelled or take some work experience in
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early ages.In my country lots of students
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or other coursers after
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their
advance level. In my opinion when we can take some experience before what will do for our future.It's worth for us because when we study with experience. Sri Lankan plenty of students destitute
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sometime they can't choose better courses because of money. In that situation students can earn money and learn.
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those things are better chances for students who looking foe bright future. To conclude. I am satisfied that allowing students to work after completing
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higher studies. It remarkable advantage and it can make them better people.
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  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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