"Prevention is better than cure".Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.
Never before had we seen
such
a violent struggle between humankind and diseases. Nowadays, there have been a lot of new serious illnesses that challenge every government. Hence
, a huge amount of money has been invested by governments around the world on
treating illness and diseases to protect their citizens. Suggestion
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However
, some people also
claim that more money should be spent on health
education
and prevention
rather than treatment
. Personally, although
I concede that investment on
medical Suggestion
in
treatment
can help protect our fellows from many serious diseases and illness, I agree that health
education
and prevention
should be promoted as the priority of health
investment.
People who are in favor
of spending more money on medical promote over another
favour
treatment
for illnesses and diseases often claim that it will promote the development of health
care as well as the discovery of the new and advanced cure
for severe Suggestion
advanced cures
the advanced cure
health
problems. For more specific, the environmental pollution, as well as unhealthy lifestyle, nowadays have led to many new diseases and even epidemics (
H5N1, SARHs or EbolaAccept space
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etc
) that require efficient medical continuing in the same way
etc.
treatment
such
as medicines, operation or implantation. Moreover
, the application of those medical treatments also
helps people to cure totally the diseases and bring the new life to people who accidentally become the victims.
On the other hand
, some people also
argue that the application of medical treatment
can only take place in a certain number of people due to the limitation in quantity and the high cost. Moreover
, the affection of medical cure seems to limited also
as it only can adapt to one health
problem at one time. Hence
, there is often a saying: “ prevention
is better than cure”. Prevention
and health
education
should be promoted in medical investment since they are likely to “kill two birds with one stone”. Not only they help people prevent the majority of health
problems but
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problems, but
also
improve the health
condition of our fellows. Moreover
, their application is also
very cheap and sometimes costs nothing because it is all about our lifestyle: eating, sleeping, exercising, etc.
In conclusion, I suppose that government
should Suggestion
the government
also
restrain diseases by education
and prevention
rather than only concentrating on costly cures and hospitals to upgrade citizen’s health
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