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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days,
Technology
 has become the prevalent in the world. Even with the time,
technology
 has completely changed the teacher in the classroom. I strongly agree with
this
 statement and following
this
 essay will explain my viewpoints in detail and reach to a conclusion.
Firstly
, it can be said that,
technology
 plays an important role in the today's world. When discussing with the
education
, the
technology
 has a positive impact on it. Today's modern
education
system
 carries through with the online teaching
method
 and there is a lot differences could be seen with the
method
 of the traditional
education
system
education
system
. Now, many of the students are able to carry their students via on online tutorials, online quiz, online lectures and online discussions.
In addition
 to
this
, students are carrying their lectures via Zoom.
Moreover
,
this
 will facilitate to carry their lecture with video calls while students will have opportunity to discuss their issues with the lectures. Despite of the traditional teaching
method
, the online teaching
method
 allows to study with the soft copies, ebooks and will not do the studies with hard copies and printed textbooks. So, the students can refer their lectures via on prerecorded lecture slides.
Similarly
,
this
 kind of
education
system
 is much more flexible to the students. Having a basic knowledge about the English and IT will easily help to access to the online lectures.
Such
 kind of
education
system
 is much more convenient to the many of the students today. Because many of the students are very busy and some of the students are non as the part time workers.
Finally
, it can be concluded that, the
Technology
 is prevalent in the today's world and
technology
 has completely replaced the teacher in the classroom.
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