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Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while others think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many forms of learning are currently used with students. While some individuals consider private learning is beneficial to the recipients, others believe that one-to-many learning is more constructive.
This
 essay will describe why one-on-one lessons are very valuable for the students, but why
also
 group lessons provide more advantages for the whole class. With the current lockdown situation, private learning became essential in every household. Almost all the students experienced the one-on-one learning with their parents or elder siblings. Many advantages raise from
this
 way,
first
 the student receives all the attention and explanation for himself,
second
 he is comfortable in his own environment and will assimilate all the given information more easily. Eventually private learning will encourage students to focus and understand all given information in a smooth approach. But is it enough for the learner to practice the whole learning experience? Learning is not only about receiving and understanding new information, it
also
 includes students’ interaction and practice in a large community. Group lessons will give students the opportunity to share ideas together and benefit from each other’s experience,
moreover it
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moreover, it
 improves social and communication skills for all attendees,
hence
 increase each person’s self-confidence and self-esteem which will improve the decision making process for them. In the future, these skills will benefit future workers in the real life experience, especially in an effective work environment.
Finally
, in order to give students a full learning practice, I think it’s very important to attend one-on-one learning once in a while, but certainly group study benefits will outweigh private learning ones and will be more beneficiary for them in their future life and work decision making process.
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