You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

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Dear

Mr.

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McMillan I hope you are doing well and enjoyed your vacation.

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Here by

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, I wanted to inform you that I got

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full time

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job in a multinational organization and due to timings I cannot continue my

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course with you. As you already knew my financial condition and

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job is very important for me at

this

time. My office is located out of

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city and it takes almost 2 hours to reach there. They hired me for the new project, where I am responsible for my team’s daily work to achieve the trust and stability of New Clients. Sometimes I have to stay back to attend

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last minute

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meetings. As of now, I cannot continue my evening classes.

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, I will rejoin the course under

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class program

semester. In the meantime, I have to focus on my job to give better results with my efforts. I know

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decision, but I believe as a professional you will understand my situation. I will see you soon and waiting for your positive response in favour of my decision. Warm Regards Mike Pollock.

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