Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

For workplace, employees must not wear
uniform
, but some people believe that
uniform
is necessary for some fields. In
this
essay we can discuss about those things those are IT, Manufacturing companies to avoid
dress
code
at the same
time
service base fields should maintain
dress
code
.
First
, In
this
modern trend, no one wear
uniform
at work place due to since they are wearing school
dress
up to twelfth grade. So even workplace
also
they can not to do.
For example
, many trending sectors do not allow
dress
code
because they follow different culture most of the
time
.
Then
, do not spend money on that.
In addition
, IT professional had to travel to other EST countries on their work so that can not be good in another country.
Then
, Medical field is playing a tremendous role in the society, they have been giving protect and take care about people's health.
For example
, The Government provides health care centres and 108 ambulances to every person at
this
time
compulsory they wear a
dress
code
to identify with the people. Some employees interested to wear
uniform
for identification
,
Accept space
,
in case if they face any issue or suddenly struck on the road other persons find out them with
uniform
so they can inform to related companies. Most of the persons do not agree with that, I think they want to wear trendy dresses at the same
time
follow the trend. I have to go a conclusion, Private and other companies' employees no need to wear
uniform
, Government employees especially service employees should wear the
uniform
.
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