With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days, most people are obsessed with eating fast
food
,
however excessive
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however, excessive
consumption
of
this
type of
food
may lead to different problems connected with health,
therefore
ban of fast
food
is considered to be the most appropriate solution for preventing these diseases. I completely disagree with
this
view and will provide my opinion with the following statements. There are several possible reasons why fast
food
should not be banned.
First
of all, it is clear that there are people who cannot cook owing to their
busyness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
and work. And the only one solution for them is to eat quickly in order to return to work soon is to prepare or order fast
food
, which affords them not to waste their time.
This
case may be
also
suitable for youngsters who have minimum time to eat during breaks at school. And fast
food
is the greatest opportunity for them to have snacks before returning to classes. Despite the fact that
such
quick snacks may be harmful
for
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to
their health, it will be good, if they do not exaggerate its acceptable
consumption
. Another reason is that some people cannot afford themselves to buy ordinary
food
, because they do not have enough money.
Therefore
, they are given an opportunity to acquire
food
for an affordable payment. Another point to consider is that people have acquired diseases,
such
as obesity because they have not possessed moderation towards appropriate
consumption
of fast
food
. It implies that a majority of people do not have a feeling which forces them not to refuse
food even
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food, even
during
such
moments when they do not feel hunger. Government should not forbid eating fast
food
for all people, because everyone has different situations.
For example
, it is not necessary for obese people
to suffer
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suffer
only due to excessive
consumption
of fast
food
. It is
also
possible that they have received
this
disease owing to genetic, as it is frequently shown in many scientific researches. In conclusion, I believe that fast
food
should not be banned if people do not overly consume it and unless it will deteriorate our well-being.
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