There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the International music that is heard eveywhere nowadays?

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Nowadays, people prefer
different sort
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a different sort
different sorts
of
mucis
an artistic form of auditory communication incorporating instrumental or vocal tones in a structured and continuous manner
music
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in the world.
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why people need
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and whether
traditional
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the traditional music
music
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of a country is more important or ınternational
music
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is more important in these days. Some people listen
music
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when they drive while others listen
music
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when they do sport. Whenever they listen,
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music changes
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the music changes mood
mood
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of people.
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, you may
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listen to bad
news or you may be
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an
upset and
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you turn on the radio and hear your best song. Your
mood
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may change and you become to feel good.
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, the opposite
sitiuation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
situations
citation
may be possible. For ınstance, it is the
last
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week day
any day except Sunday (and sometimes except Saturday)
weekday
,
friday
the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day
Friday
, and you make some plans for your weekend.
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, you get in your car and when you turn on the radio, you hear the song, which is the best song for your ex-boyfriend and your. After which, your
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become
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becomes
bad
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worse
and you feel sorry.
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,
music
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affect
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affects
all of our
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life
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lives
and we need
music
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for our soul and
mood
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.
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,
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is the main
nutrioun
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
nutrient
nutrition
in our soul so we need it.
On the other hand
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, traditional
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of a country
loose
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loses
lose
their importance because young people prefer the international
music
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. They pick it because of the fact that they learn new cultures and they want to live with them.
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,
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life
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the life
of young people is more different than the
last
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days.
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, there aren’t many traditional brands or
tradional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
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. Everything in our
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become
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becomes
global.
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, what they see their surroundings, they prefer it
,
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,
which is international. They
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don’t find their traditional
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of a country anywhere, except festivals.
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is the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reason. In conclusion, which kind of
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we listen, we have to listen
music
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for our soul. It is not important to be
tradinational
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
or international but kind of traditional musics
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their attraction and international musics become popular nowadays.
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