There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the International music that is heard eveywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, people prefer
different sort
of Suggestion
a different sort
different sorts
mucis
in the world. an artistic form of auditory communication incorporating instrumental or vocal tones in a structured and continuous manner
music
mussels
This
essay mention
why people need Suggestion
mentions
music
and whether traditional
Suggestion
the traditional music
music
of a country is more important or ınternational music
is more important in these days.
Some people listen music
when they drive while others listen music
when they do sport. Whenever they listen, music changes
Suggestion
the music changes mood
mood
of people. For example
, you may listen bad
news or you may be Suggestion
listen to bad
a
upset and Suggestion
an
then
you turn on the radio and hear your best song. Your mood
may change and you become to feel good. However
, the opposite sitiuation
may be possible. For ınstance, it is the the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
situations
citation
last
week day
, any day except Sunday (and sometimes except Saturday)
weekday
friday
, and you make some plans for your weekend. the sixth day of the week; the fifth working day
Friday
Then
, you get in your car and when you turn on the radio, you hear the song, which is the best song for your ex-boyfriend and your. After which, your mood
become
Suggestion
becomes
bad
and you feel sorry. Suggestion
worse
Therefore
, music
affect
all of our Suggestion
affects
life
and we need Suggestion
lives
music
for our soul and mood
. In addition
, music
is the main nutrioun
in our soul so we need it.
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
nutrient
nutrition
On the other hand
, traditional music
of a country loose
their importance because young people prefer the international Suggestion
loses
lose
music
. They pick it because of the fact that they learn new cultures and they want to live with them. In addition
, life
of young people is more different than the Suggestion
the life
last
days. For example
, there aren’t many traditional brands or tradional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
life
. Everything in our life
become
global. Suggestion
becomes
Therefore
, what they see their surroundings, they prefer it,
which is international. They Accept space
,
also
don’t find their traditional music
of a country anywhere, except festivals. This
is the another
reason.
In conclusion, which kind of not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
music
we listen, we have to listen music
for our soul. It is not important to be tradinational
or international but kind of traditional musics consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
loose
their attraction and international musics become popular nowadays.fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
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