15 Traffic and housing problems are major cities could be solved by moving a large company and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extend, did you agree or disagree with this opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
my namee is ciroeddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee d ed ee d ed e dew dwe daw edd waesd wea f awrsd wref eawe< <fqew afdd aewrdsg eras dgeqars dg ersdg eer asg erasdg ear ger
g
Use synonyms
er sg res gre
g
Use synonyms
er
g
Use synonyms
ers
g
Use synonyms
erg r ge rs ger sg ersg er
g
Use synonyms
er sg er dsg ersdg er sdg ersd ger sdg er sdg er gr erg regwr
Submitted by Cirillo Chirullo on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: