There has been a dramatic growth in the number of people studying at universities in the last few decades. While some people see this as a positive trend which raises the general level of education within the community, others fear that it is lowering the quality of education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the increase in student numbers at university? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a common fact that the number of students studying at a university is skyrocketing in the late 1990s and the millennium.
This
is the reason of
rising
increasing in quantity or value
raising
the literate population, and
also
decline of education's quality. I will briefly elaborate in terms of positive and negative sides. In the modern life, many individuals have a great opportunity
to
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for
ongoing tertiary education.
Thus
, the rate of
graduated
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graduate
people
have increased
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has increased
sharply, it has never had been before. To climb considerately,
this
rate, can be occurred unemployment among the youth.
For example
, a person who
have
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has
a bachelor degree does not want to
hired
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hire
as a blue-collar.
Although
, his/her college may not have
adequate high level course
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an adequate high level course
for obtaining a knowledge students.
That is
to say, if a student
go
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goes
a crowded schooling tool, she/he would not learn anything because of lecturer cannot take care about every
students
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student
, due to the authorities of the universities have not enough budget for high quality educate material, and professors.
On the other hand
, there should be some precautions to alleviate these problems. Overall, the universities' quality should not be plunged whatever the situations will be turned.
In addition
, restriction of the learner number can be a solution for a healthy learning
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. When these types of drawbacks
inhibite
to put down by force or authority
inhibit
inhibited
, the majority of the society will have been
satistified
filled with satisfaction
satisfied
.
For example
, a municipality in my country has declared that they will
employe
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
employ
the labours after the graduation which defined as specific departments.
Therefore
, thanks to guarantee jobs, the people will tend to apply these priority courses. In conclusion, even if some drawbacks of the rising of the people who have a university degree, every
issues
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issue
can eliminate by the authorities easily. At the
last
words, if the high level education gives learners mostly, the civilization would be developed because of the
strenght
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strength
people struggle in order to prevail over the life's obstacles.
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