you are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social event's organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser: expressing your interest in yhe role requesting more information about it explain what experience you have

Dear Mr James, I am a student of the one-month french intensive training programme and I am writing to express my interest in the
role
of Social event organizer that, our head of the course is looking for someone to take up and to request
further
information about it. Let me
first
explain to you
about
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my previous experience with
this
kind of
role
. During my higher studies in my home country, I used to participate in event organizing activities, fundraising campaigns and several other social works for my university.
In addition
to that, ever since I have moved to the UK, I have been continuously participating in volunteer activities that are being offered by regional charitable organizations.
Furthermore
, I believe
this
role
will definitely offer me a great chance to interact with the management and it will
also
help me to network with several of the students from other departments. All the above reasons motivated me to apply for
this
position. I believe that some of the key details about the
role
such
as the type of work that one has to undertake; duration of the responsibility; the team; etc., have not been shared yet. It would be of great help if you could
also
share
those information
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your's faithfully, Akilan Palaniappan
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