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There are an increasing number of advertisements that target children. Many parents are worried that these advertisements may be harmful to their children. However, some companies claim that their advertising provides children with useful information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many advertisements are aimed at children today than ever before. Parents and companies have conflicting views about whether these advertisements are harmful to children. Parents tend to believe that these advertisements provide misleading information to their children and cause them to develop bad habits. Many of the advertisements that are aimed at children promote unhealthy snacks and addictive toys by making the products look attractive or entertaining. Children are more easily influenced by these advertisements than adults.
As a result
, many of them put pressure on their parents to buy the advertised products for them. Children who are exposed to advertisements for unhealthy snacks or addictive toys are
therefore
 more likely to develop an unhealthy diet or spend too much time playing with toys.
However
, some companies, argue that the advertisements for their products provide children with useful information. There are many advertisements that promote educational toys on television or on the internet.
For example
, many television commercials inform children about new toys that can develop their independent thinking skills or language skills.
Also
, some advertisements,
such
 as the advertisements for children’s sports clothing and sports shoes, help to promote healthy lifestyles among children. These advertisements help children to gain a better understanding of the benefits of an active lifestyle. Some advertisements
also
 have famous athletes in them, who are good role models for children and encourage them to exercise regularly. My own opinion is that advertisements that are aimed at children should be regulated. Companies need to ensure that children and their parents are well informed about the potential risks of the advertised products.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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