Many American believe that the death penalty is effective in deterring people from committing murder. However, other disagree, and many sociologists argue that the evidence does not support this view. Now, write an essay to an educated reader to tell which point of view you agree with. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

Many American believe that the

death

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penalty

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is effective in deterring people from committing

murder

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. But

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

disagree, and many sociologists argue that. In my opinion,

refers to the speaker or writer

disargee

be of different opinions

disagree

with the

death

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penalty

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is effective for people from committing

murder

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. Following,

refers to the speaker or writer

will argue for my view in

this

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essay. In today's society, the people

are learn

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are learning

learn

have learned

so much good things

from

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for

their family, school and anywhere they can learn. But still have some people do the bad thing like theft, fraud and do anything to damage the body and

life

Suggestion

the life

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

. The committing

murder

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is the worst crime. We have the law to treat

this

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crime and the

death

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penalty

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is maybe to do because you don't have a reason to kill someone. The life is

best gift

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the best gift

from GOD and their parent.

However

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, Every mistake has a way to fix it and the

death

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penalty

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also

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a way

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depriving someone of their life. So

refers to the speaker or writer

think we can write the new law for the worst crime as well as the committing

murder

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Finally

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, I think the people do not the bad thing as well as kill someone and I disagree

Suggestion

with

the

death

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penalty

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is effective in deterring people from committing

murder

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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