Many American believe that the death penalty is effective in deterring people from committing murder. However, other disagree, and many sociologists argue that the evidence does not support this view. Now, write an essay to an educated reader to tell which point of view you agree with. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words.

Many American believe that the
death
penalty
is effective in deterring people from committing
murder
. But
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
disagree, and many sociologists argue that. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
disargee
be of different opinions
disagree
with the
death
penalty
is effective for people from committing
murder
. Following,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will argue for my view in
this
essay. In today's society, the people
are learn
Suggestion
are learning
learn
have learned
so much good things
from
Suggestion
for
their family, school and anywhere they can learn. But still have some people do the bad thing like theft, fraud and do anything to damage the body and
life
Suggestion
the life
of
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
. The committing
murder
is the worst crime. We have the law to treat
this
crime and the
death
penalty
is maybe to do because you don't have a reason to kill someone. The life is
best gift
Suggestion
the best gift
from GOD and their parent.
However
, Every mistake has a way to fix it and the
death
penalty
is
also
a way
to
Suggestion
of
depriving someone of their life. So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think we can write the new law for the worst crime as well as the committing
murder
.
Finally
, I think the people do not the bad thing as well as kill someone and I disagree
to
Suggestion
with
the
death
penalty
is effective in deterring people from committing
murder
.
Accept space
.
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