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Road transport is taking over rail services. Discuss the positive and negative effects of this situation. Is this situation true for your country?

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In today's Era,
transport
 is a burning issue. In our world
transport
 varieties increase day by day like buses cars and rails. In
this
 essay I will discuss why roadways and more popular
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 railways There are many benefits of
transport
then
 rails.
To begin
 with, as we know that time is money so with the help of
transport
 we can cover a long distance in short time.
Secondly
,
transport
 is a door to door service so import and export is possible for any distance.
Finally it
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Finally, it
 is the only
transport which
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transport, which
 is
use
Suggestion
used
 for hilly area. On the downside, railways are more comfortable and cheaper
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 roadways.
Secondly there
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Secondly, there
 is no any weight limitation, we can carry any type of thing in rails.
Finally
 transports are affected by bad weather like flood rain etc.
On the other hand
, railways are not affected by any weather situation. In India, roadways take over the railways. In 1880s 80% people used railways and 20%
use
 roadways
however
 nowadays 80%
use
 roadways and 20%
use
 railways. To put it in nutshells, I pen down say that, roadways definitely take over the railways. There are many pros and cons of
this
 situation that I discuss in the above paragraph.
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