Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Using
plastic
bags is increasing day by day
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Undoubtedly, it is the matter of grave concern as
plastic
is detrimental to the
environment
. I
,
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,
strongly,
favors
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favour
favours
Favors
complete ban
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a complete ban
of its usage. Changing shopping trends as well as use and through policy
give
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gives
a raise to enormous packaging
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,
which
,
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in turn, leads to huge demand of
plastic
bags because they are
convienient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
and safer than paper bags. By the dint of these benefits, people as well as product manufacturers prefer
plastic
bags.Apart from
this
, they can be used multiple times.
Thus
,
convienence
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
and inclining demands for
pacakeging
the business of packing
packaging
leads to consumption of
plastic
bags in the market. Even though it has few advantages
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,
it is dangerous for the
environment
as
plastic
in non-
biodegrable
capable of being decomposed by e.g. bacteria
biodegradable
material
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it
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It
would take more than 100 years to
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
vanish
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:
consequently
, causes a vast amount of waste and
hence
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the soil pollution. Not only
this
, excess usage of
plastic
causes
major diseases
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the major diseases
in both animals as well as humans
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beacuse
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Because
Beacuse
animal could eat it directly from the soil and humans nowadays eats
alot
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a lot
of packaged food in
plastic
containers which might be become toxic due to chemical reactions.
Thus
, by taking these environmental and health hazards in consideration
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,
governments should put a complete ban on
plastic
packaging and provide some alternate solutions
such
as, paper bags
,
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jute bags and clothe packaging. In conclusion,
although
plastic
bags have few merits, their detrimental effects to the
environment
and its habitat could not be overlooked at any cost
.
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I opine that, it should be prohibited
by
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from
following some
environment
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environmentally
friendly methods.
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