Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is a good thing. While others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Dear Mrs. Elizabeth Williams,
This
is Chen Fan from China (Female, DOB: 29/5/1997), a student in Shandong University. I am writing to express my keen to apply for the doctoral program in the culture, media and creative industries department at King's College London as its research interests are an excellent match for my academic background. I have obtained a bachelor's degree and am studying for a master's degree from Shandong University, China, majoring in cultural industry management at History Culture College. I have had chances to conduct many discussions and reflections on various frontier theories and hot topics of Chinese
culture creativity
Accept comma addition
culture, creativity
industries and popular culture, which can be well reflected in the papers I have published and the projects I have joined. I now wish to continue my academic career with a PhD in modern cultural industry project management. As you can see in my CV, my IELTS score is 7, and I have made sufficient language preparation for the
further
study in the UK.
In addition
, I would like to know some more information about application forms and financial aid. I would be very grateful if you could give me the information as soon as possible. I am looking forward to your
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
response.
Submitted by 范晨 on

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