The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#media #stories #report #news

this

day and age, many people reckon that the media ought to update more stories of good news. From my perspective,

although

I concur partly that good news play a vital role

Suggestion

society, I still lean towards that other

sorts

Suggestion

sort

of articles

also

should be updated the similar frequency

Suggestion

with

good news.

Initially

, good news exert a number of positive implications on citizens.

To begin

with, the more positive news

are

Suggestion

, the more optimist lives inhabitants have. To be specific, good news

include

Suggestion

includes

lovely stories, conducive activities

such

as higher awareness of

dwellers

Suggestion

the dwellers

of protecting the environment or having the absolutely novel medical treatment for Covid 19, which is a pandemic and one of the most severe issue of the world.

As a result

, citizens might be more likely to create more positive lives that lead to the action of striving to make a contribution to

this

civilized society.

However

, other types of news

such

as current affairs or bad news should be updated for inhabitants. The initial reason is the warnings that stem from current affairs. In detail, current affairs include the hottest and the most severe news

such

as pandemics and

the higher

Suggestion

the high

rate of crime not only in each

country but

Accept comma addition

country, but

also

in over the world to issue warnings about restriction of going outside in terms of

covid

having or marked by a curve or smoothly rounded bend

curved

covered

19 period or being cautious.

Besides

, bad news

such

as the mortality of several

dwellers especially

Accept comma addition

dwellers, especially

teenagers or the poorness of farmers and other labour workers

also

create the sympathy which is one of the most indispensable personality of

human

Suggestion

a human

Therefore

, citizens will have

higher perception

Suggestion

a higher perception

of how happy their lives are that leads to the appreciation and be used as motivation to work more studiously. In conclusion, ...

Submitted by Hà Anh Nguyễn on Fri Jun 05 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

292 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.
In this modern era, there are many social spaces between the wealthy and the poor people in our society. This essay will discuss about the causes and solution of this situation.
7
band
In some countries, birth rates are falling and experts say that by 2050 these countries will have far more adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. What problem might this cause in the future? Can anything be done to solve this issue?
It is predicted that, by 2050, the percentage of the population aged 65 or older will have risen significantly in some places. This is likely to cause problems for the countries concerned, and finding a solution will not be easy.
8
band
4.Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s is bad for them. Why is this? What is an effective way to improve people’s healthy eating habits?
In the modern world where convenience takes priority, more concerns stem from people's consumerism of fast food. Even at the expense of health, people still opt for these unhealthy meals. This essay outlines some possible explanations for this phenomenon and gives some ways to improve unwholesome eating practices.
4
band
39.It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that individuals do not need to travel around to acquire knowledge of cultures of other countries, since there are other resources such as book, films and the Internet where people can find information. This essay disagrees with this statement because the way of understanding is different and books and movies are subjective.
7
band
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, recently, the phenomenon of saying the fact and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I fully agree with this fact that although lie in some circumstances would be preferred, people have to tell the truth in all different and difficult situations in their lives. In turn, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this fact.

The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

In some countries, birth rates are falling and experts say that by 2050 these countries will have far more adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. What problem might this cause in the future? Can anything be done to solve this issue?

4.Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s is bad for them. Why is this? What is an effective way to improve people’s healthy eating habits?

39.It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.