The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
day and age, many people reckon that the media ought to update more stories of good news. From my perspective,
although
I concur partly that good news play a vital role
on
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in
society, I still lean towards that other
sorts
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sort
of articles
also
should be updated the similar frequency
to
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with
good news.
Initially
, good news exert a number of positive implications on citizens.
To begin
with, the more positive news
are
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is
, the more optimist lives inhabitants have. To be specific, good news
include
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includes
lovely stories, conducive activities
such
as higher awareness of
dwellers
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the dwellers
of protecting the environment or having the absolutely novel medical treatment for Covid 19, which is a pandemic and one of the most severe issue of the world.
As a result
, citizens might be more likely to create more positive lives that lead to the action of striving to make a contribution to
this
civilized society.
However
, other types of news
such
as current affairs or bad news should be updated for inhabitants. The initial reason is the warnings that stem from current affairs. In detail, current affairs include the hottest and the most severe news
such
as pandemics and
the higher
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the high
rate of crime not only in each
country but
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country, but
also
in over the world to issue warnings about restriction of going outside in terms of
covid
having or marked by a curve or smoothly rounded bend
curved
covered
19 period or being cautious.
Besides
, bad news
such
as the mortality of several
dwellers especially
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dwellers, especially
teenagers or the poorness of farmers and other labour workers
also
create the sympathy which is one of the most indispensable personality of
human
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a human
.
Therefore
, citizens will have
higher perception
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a higher perception
of how happy their lives are that leads to the appreciation and be used as motivation to work more studiously. In conclusion, ...
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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