More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
It is often argued that childhood obesity is increasing dramatically in the wealthiest countries and it is one of the main problems. I completely agree with
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opinion and think that how it is too easy to see an overweight child.
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believe that the fast food represents the refers to the speaker or writer
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reason of the overweight. In the most developed countries, there are lots of these shops and many people go there with their family to spend less time. Linking Words
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, many parents when they take their children from school during their lunchtime decide to eat at the fast food to save time.
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discussion. More and more children prefer to play video games. Linking Words
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, they prefer to stay at home than doing sport or playing with their friends outside. Linking Words
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, when I was a child, I used to play in the garden in the front of the school after the lessons.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the obesity can be resolved easily by eating healthy food and doing exercises.Linking Words
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