Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Animal are an integral part of our eco-system.
However
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, it is irrefutable that the percentage of the wild animals are rapidly reducing from
last
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half-century. There are numerous of reasons behind it. I will elaborate on these reasons and give effective steps which help to protect wildlife.
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and foremost, reason behind it is deforestation. Nowadays, the human population is increasing day by day so that demand of society
also
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raises than supply.
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of it, people need more accommodation, food, industries, and a better lifestyle in order to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
all these desires. In animals download trend, cutting the natural habitat is becoming
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a big concern
. Some segment of society liked wild animals for their benefits.
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as for decorating their house or office, cosmetics, clothes.
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, some people use tiger skin for the interior of their house, trunks of elephants are used for import and export purpose which gives profits.
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, individuals put wildlife in dangerous for their own benefits. There are some possible solutions to solve
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problem.
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of all, individual and government should co-operate with each other. To illustrate, if anyone saw a wild animal in the living area
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they should inform the forest department
first
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instead
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of beating them.
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, the government should enact some strict laws against hunting or cutting trees.
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, everyone should
pant
put or set (seeds, seedlings, or plants) into the ground
plant
paint
more and more trees to give a natural habitat to animals. To conclude, deforestation and the overcrowded area
is
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are
the main reason for decreasing the wild
animals but
Accept comma addition
animals, but
it is quite important to protect them and
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is only possible with the cooperation of society. If they do not save
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the new generation cannot see them in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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