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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Breakthrough in the modern communication system has given us a possibility not to write real letters and terminate former ways of interaction.
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 essay agrees with the statement that using envelopes and written mail is not in trend anymore.
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, we will discuss the merits of
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 of present-date devices and,
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, the main reasons traditional devices for circulation of information being out of date. With the rapid growth of technologies which are being used
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 we can keep in touch whenever and wherever we want. It means that there is no need to write what we would like to convey down, buy a wrapper,
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 enclose your writing, go to the post office due to the working hours and send it.
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 of all, it can be clearly understood that using telecommunications is a simple way of messaging. Not only is it a convenient form of social intercourse, but it is
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 a solution that helps us save our time. There are
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 applications as Telegram, WhatsApp, Facebook and other ones which are not time-consuming and they aid us not to lose time, but use it beneficially.
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, modern communication sources are less harmful than
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 way of delivering any kind of information due to the fact that it helps to reduce deforestation. Paper producing companies are prone to cut down trees. According to the article “Top 10 largest paper producing companies in the world”, the United States of America is considered to be the largest market for
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the paper
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product
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. It is one of the most enormous negative impacts on the environment. In
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 our ecosystem suffers. To conclude, using up-to-date gadgets has made our life uncomplicated due to being easily approachable and less time-consuming.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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