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some people trust in their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. other do not judge a person's character quickly. compare these two attitudes. which attitude do you agree with? why?

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Based on the studies of
psyche
Suggestion
the psyche
, it is said that the early
impression
 can lead to a lot of information about
a
Suggestion
an
 individual.
On the other hand
, People believe
this
 fact that it takes
time
 to understand a human actual personality. In the essay we will try to put light on the both of the facts and will share my opinion on it.
early
at or near the beginning of a period of time or course of events or before the usual or expected time
Early
inpression
a vague idea in which some confidence is placed
impression
impressions
 always telling you plenty things about a
person
 in his or her basic act of meeting or greeting the others.
for
Suggestion
For
 instance, if a
person
 goes for an interview, the
first
 things he or she will do well makes an
impression
 about how confident and active you are. On the note, the interviewer can develop an opinion regarding the candidate in a small amount of
time
. On the opposite side, discussing the believe that
first
impression
 is not always right, is actually true as well. It really depends on the situation and the relativity to that
person
. Some good looking individuals simply fake a personality by wearing an expensive suit and acting on a rehearsed scenario for a short period of
time
. In order to better understand the
person
 we need to look and observe
then
objective case of they
them
than
than than
 in the different phases of life in their ups and downs, that's how they react in those movements. To conclude, I would say that it really depends on the demand of the need of a
person
, to exemplify, if we are hiring someone for a specific job a
first
impression
 will all we have to judge that candidate, but if it's about a
person
 who you going to marry, in that case it's better to ask for some good amount of
time
 to understand the
person
 to his actual nature.
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