Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is commonly believed by some people that

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the zoo

is an unpleasant

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for animals to live while others think that there several benefits of

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the zoo

for endangered animals. In my opinion, I agree with the latter statement.

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, animals did not have freedom as they used to have when they lived in their natural habitat. Most of them are restricted and forced to live in the cages or constraint areas, which lead to health issues as well as mental problems, especially stress when they are imprisoned in the unfamiliar

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, most of the aquarium that displays white sharks to attract more visitors is facing the challenging and dilemma as all white sharks were unable to survive more than five days after they had been moved into the new surroundings.

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raises issues and concern among animal experts and protecting wildlife groups that animals are suffering to be apart from their family and lack the right to live freely in the suitable environment.

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the zoo

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poses critical benefits to overall society.

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, it plays an important role to protect some vulnerable species

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as koalas and kangaroos.

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, from the recent

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in Australian that killed more than billion of wildlife, zoos across the country became the new shelters for million lost and weaken animals to stay and rest of

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severe natural disaster.

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, zoos are

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the

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where schools used to educate young generation. It provides the

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where children can learn and closely view a live rare species in the safest environment. In conclusion,

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has posed negative impact to some vulnerable animals according to the restricted environment, it

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brings various merits to protect nearly extinct species and to educate our future generation.