Both the poor and rich find the accessibility into university difficult..do you agree or disagree

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Now a day's education plays major role in our society and it is getting really hard for lower, mid and as well as high class people to get admitted into the higher educational
institute
. In
this
essay I would like to press my thoughts, if I agree or not with
this
statement and as well as I would like to provide suitable examples to emphasize my point.
Firstly
, Education is very important to become successful, many high level study university required excellence or professional level skills to get admitted in, due to which there is major competition as the seats are limited in
such
university. But, it is not the same
case
for all other educational
institute
Suggestion
institutes
, every
college
or university has their own requirements to get admission.
For instance
, To get
in particular
college
there might be a requirement for 80% of their high school or maybe they require work experience in their study field. I believe it doesn't matter whether you are poor or rich if someone meet the requirement they are eligible to attend to
college
.
Secondly
, Some educational
institute
made
this
as a business
instead
of focusing on learning. They provide admission to only those student's who provide with more funds to
institute
or who have recommendations from higher ups.
For example
, In India some of the medical and engineering
college
takes bribes to admit students, in which
case
many high educated students are not getting opportunity as they are unable to pay the bribe, in
such
case
only rich peoples are given the chance. To summarize, both of them as their own pros and cons. It mostly depends on the
institute
and their requirements one could say where the study is praised more there rich and poor doesn't matter and it is difficult for both of them to get admitted, but in
case
Suggestion
the case
of colleges which tend to take money as a bribe for admitting they're only rich are allowed to get admitted.
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