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Some parents buy large amounts of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child having number of toys?

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In the modern era, parents spend a lot of money in order to purchase many toys for
their
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
children
Suggestion
Children
 to play with. There are certain pros and cons that should be considered by each and every parent, who let their
child
 to have many toys to play. Apparently, letting the children have many toys to play with help them in physical and mental developments. Most of the toys will help the
child
 in order to develop communication skills from younger age itself.
For example
, Lego blocks benefits the
child
 as a booster for learning purposes as well as it is a toy which is used to play.
Moreover
, playing computer games which are educational, playing scrabble, puzzles will improve the creativity and the knowledge of the young children
although
 they are considered as toys or playful occasions. Despite the above mentioned advantages, there are some downsides
also
 to be resulted in. The biggest problem is the
child
 wastes the parents’ money so as to get more and more new toys which makes the
child
 happy, since children get easily attached
with
Suggestion
to
 the toys and hard to take them apart.
This
 limits the children’s mutual contact with their parents and children become selfish and greedy sometimes.
In addition
, toys will limit the children with fewer branches to get hold on with and will
also
 make the children more
playful even
Accept comma addition
playful, even
 though they will be grownups in the future due to the addiction of
toys
Suggestion
Toys
.
For example
, recent surveys have shown with the misuse of toys, even teenagers
keeps
Suggestion
keep
 on playing with toys rather than discovering their future career paths. To conclude,
toys play
Accept comma addition
toys, play
 a main role in children’s life, which will certainly benefit them because it enables them to learn communication from their early stages and being balanced.
However
, if children get too attached with their toys, it will limit their success.
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