You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit.

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Dear Jenny, Hello! Hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirit in Sydney, Australia. I am highly delighted to tell you about my new dwelling in 66 streets, Calgary, Alberta as I shifted from my old apartment

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29.05.2020. Pal, as you are aware t of that I have been living in Nova Scotia for two years in order to complete my studies, I could not able to contact my parents who reside in Alberta. I feel dishearted because I have not seen them for a very long time.

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, I have got a job offer from

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IT company

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located in Calgary where I can work as a Web Programmer.

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, I have decided to shift from

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Nova Scotia to Alberta so that I have an opportunity to meet my parents

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every weekend and spend some quality

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together as well as I can commence my

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job in Calgary which is 20 minutes away from my new abode. Dearie, my joy has no boundaries when I let you know about my new home. Actually,

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residence is

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semi-detached with

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bedroom

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attached

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modern

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bathroom.

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building has a modular as well as well-furnished kitchen along with

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living area. It not only has a small lush green lawn

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but

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has a provision for car parking. Apart from

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, my apartment is located near all the amenities

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as schools, hospitals,

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and parks along with

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a gym

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that cater

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need of its residents as I can easily avail all facilities. Sweetie, as I am going to organize a warming party on upcoming Sunday, 6.6.2020, it would be a great pleasure if you join and become

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limelight of

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party. Even, I

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have invited all of our college friends where we can recollect our past memories. I am eagerly waiting for you soon. Love, Harry.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

321 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit.

The Closing

you and some friends ate meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you wre very pleased with the food and sevise.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

many parts of the world people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home . this is bad because home cooked food is much better for us to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?