You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, • Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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is to inform you that some of my things were damaged by your company while moving to my new apartment. It was on the 20th of April that your removal agents, comprising of four(4) men and a driver came in a truck to move my personal belongings. The movement commenced at about 7am and continued till 1pm. The main things moved were electronic gadgets, kitchen equipment, furniture, luggage and books. Yesterday while arranging and fixing the moved items, I discovered that three of them had been impaired. The screen of my plasma television which was packed in a carton is broken. One of the bedroom cushion sofas is badly torn, exposing the interior foam.

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, the lid of the deep freezer is

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broken. I implore you to kindly come over and confirm my claims and get these damaged items repaired. I will be very grateful if my request is treated urgently. Yours sincerely, Lawrencia

Affiah

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Lawrencia AffiahSat Jun 06 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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