Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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In today’s school systems tests and examinations are major features in many countries where
test
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plays an important role is believed by some citizens. Whereas on same scale others argue that they are not mandatory.
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, I feel that testing should
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one in the school system for the following reasons.
Firstly
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, a common advantage of examination is that it differentiates best and
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poorest
performers
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.e., hard working students are smart in
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the tests
compared to others.
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, school kids feel that if they want to upgrade for
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standard they should appear and pass exams.
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this
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concept creates a responsibility on studies.
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However many
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However, many
nations in the world
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prefer
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testing format in education.
On the other hand
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, few drawbacks are noticed
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as slow learners cannot perform well in the
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and
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creates inferior complexity among students. If opportunity, time and new learning techniques are imparted to students, they can perform better
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on
tests.
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, suicide trends are seen by
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examination system.
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developed countries are
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exempted
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testing feature.
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phenomenon created confusion in parents, children and
teachers whether
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teachers, whether
to continue with the
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pattern or simply promote students to
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the next higher class
.
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brought a drastic change in many countries which headed toward exemption of tests. To conclude with, testing the candidate has both advantages and disadvantages and the overall major advantage is
slow learner benefit
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the slow learner benefit
a lot from exam system. If
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passed
an exam in not mandatory because maturity and seriousness towards studies are not seen in childhood days, the students can improve as well. The
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does not always reflect the true reflection of the students’ merit and
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are often biased.
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