WITH AN INCREASING POPULATION COMMUNICATING VIA THE INTERNET AND TEXT MESSAGING, FACE TO FACE COMMUNICATION WILL BECOME A THING OF THE PAST. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?

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a group
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of people that sophisticated technology, while population is being
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a rise, has led people to leave non-virtual
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and prefer to relate to others through the
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or text messaging. It seems to that
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to
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remains and
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always used in wider society, and I will explain why in
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, according to the stability of the
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,
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through the
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relies on the signal. No matter how palatable the application of text messaging in the
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is, or how
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delightful
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internet
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reason comes from the respect of effectiveness. Relating to people via Zoom, a widely-known application currently used for some higher education institutions to run online learning due to
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outbreak has led a field-research to reveal that mainly Indonesian students are not seriously communicating to one another, especially to teachers. The ineffectiveness of
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virtual-contact foresees people to remain and always use
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people to relate to one another everywhere and every time easily without depending on spaces or places. Despite
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, there is a wide disparity of access of the
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worldwide, because not all people are able, or feel comfortably relating to others in
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way.
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, non-virtual
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seems to be much more effective and accessible. To reiterate, even non-virtual contact has limitation of space, the stability of
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connectivity and a field-research’s reveal combine together to make a
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to
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communication
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remain and always used in wider society.
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