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People spend a lot of money on various things as they earn more money nowadays than before.is it a positive or negative development.

#people #money #development
As earning power improves
,
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,
this
 lead the masses in purchasing and consuming lavish items more than in the ancient times. In these days,
the high
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higher
 income rate and better employment change the way of living.
However
, it has both constructive and
distructive
causing destruction or much damage
destructive
 impacts on overall growth of
humans which
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humans, which
 will be discussed in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. To commence with, there are numerous advantages of the huge amount of expenses on electronic gadgets, travel and many other items. Whereas, adding the new commodities play a significant role in
enhances
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enhancing
 the living standards and makes it the
life
 easier and comfortable for human beings. To illustrate, the computer
become
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becomes
 an indispensable part of individual
life
. During the lockdown because of
cronovirus we
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carnivorous, we
carnivorous we
 can use
this
 scientific aid to pay our bills online and especially in
study
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the study
studies
 it is extremely helpful to attend online classes Even from home.
Therefore
, paying
on
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for
 necessary items improve the living quality.
On the other hand
, when excessive amounts are wasted on useless commodities,
then
 it
mitigate
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mitigates
 the preference of savings
.
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.
As a result
, it would be difficult to survive in
future
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a future life
the future life
life
for
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in
 any circumstances.
for
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For
 an instance, in the past time people could not buy even a single car in their full
life but
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life, but
 today with the high salaries people can purchase more than one
cars
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car
.
Thus
,
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,
instead
 of using one automobile they tend to show their prosperity. In the nutshell, no doubt there are more pros of spending as well as people should
also
 consider the hard work behind their goals that lead them in wonderful
life
.
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