Some people feel that school should teach children how to be good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What skills people need to be a good parent?

It is argued by some that in school children should learn good parenting. I,
however
, disagree with
this
view for two reasons.
Firstly
, adolescents are not mature enough, and
secondly
,
schools
Suggestion
school's
responsibility is to educate them well.
Also
, I believe that a person should possess the skills of being a good human being and friendly in nature with their children. There are various reasons why I believe that children should not learn the subject of how to be a good parent in the schools.
Firstly
, the
schools
Suggestion
schools'
school's
integral role is to give proper education to their students.
This
is because, if the school educate well to its students and provides the degree, they have a decent job in the future, well-established career and financial stability.
Secondly
, adolescents are psychologically immature. As there are many subjects in the schools to learn and there is a lot of stress while studying,
such
good parenting subjects will not be enough for them to understand at that age, and
this
would distract them from their academic subjects, even worse they could score poor grades in the exam. There are many parenting skills there which a good parent should have, but in my opinion, one of them is being a good human being. It is
very essential skill
Suggestion
a very essential skill
that one parent
should has
Suggestion
should have
because having
such
skills parents can teach its child how to respect elders and especially
girl
Suggestion
a girl
or woman, providing them good manners while eating and talking, and provide good moral values and ethics. Another skill which I believe is necessary is friendly nature.
This
is because, if the parents have
friendly nature
Suggestion
a friendly nature
, they will be the best friend of its children, and due to
this
the child will always approach its parents
first
and would not hide anything from them. In conclusion,
although
some support that children should learn a good parenting subjects in the schools only, I completely disagree with them because the school should provide good education to them and children are not enough mature to understand
such
subject particularly at that age.
Moreover
, the parents should hone the skills,
such
as being a good human and the best friend of its child.
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