Some people say that parents should place restrictions on the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to spend this time reading books. Do you agree or disagree?

The majority believes that children's leisure time should be reduced and more time must be spent studying. I concur with
this
and I would prove
this
beyond reasonable doubt in
this
essay.
To begin
with, nowadays many children are addicted to television programmes like cartoons and comedy,
also
computer games.
Although
, all work without play make Jack a dull boy. Children must have time to relax and even learn other skills,
in contrast
, Parents must make a conscious effort to curb
this
trending act that could have a negative impact
onthe
Suggestion
on the
lives of these children.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Screen time
  • Attention span
  • Academic performance
  • Physical exercise
  • Childhood obesity
  • Language skills
  • Creativity
  • Imagination
  • Empathy
  • Educational programs
  • Personal growth
  • Balanced approach
  • Interactive games
  • Media consumption
  • Self-regulation
  • Distractions
  • Technology-enhanced learning
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