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"Harry Potter and the secret chamber" is the
second
film
saga that has been written by J.K.Rowling. It is one of the most entertaining fiction films that T have ever seen. It has lots of special effects and stars Daniel Radclife as Harry Potter and Emma Watson in the role of Hermione. The
film
is set in a parallel world where many magicians live. Harry Potter is the main character who tries to save people from Voldemort, the villain of the
film
. The plot, which focuses on a strange school, is not quite complicated, but it is little bit strange because all the people have special powers and many secrets that may surprise you. The cast is not bad, but in my opinion Emma Wattson gives the best performance. As for the visual elements, the special effects are amazing because people can fly and play football in the sky sitting on a broom. I would recommend the
film especially
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film, especially
people who like fiction films. If you like reading you can continue to enjoy
this
story before it appears in the cinema.
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