In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their won country. Nowadays. they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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If before many students were studying mainly in their own
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, nowadays we can witness an increase in the number of students that take the opportunity to study overseas. We can certainly claim to be advantages, but
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disadvantages regarding
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choice. The first disadvantage of studying abroad is that the
language
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used,
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is a foreign one and
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might have
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during the learning process.
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, learning new complex topics using a different
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from the native one, can make some concepts more difficult to understand and it could lead to
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some exams, slowing down the university career. Another disadvantage is related to the so-called brain drain. Brain drain is the phenomenon in which skilled human resources migrate to another
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to find jobs, causing
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of professionals in their own
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. Even though
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could be just a side effect, I believe that those who decide to study abroad are more likely to remain abroad, and after the studies look for a job opportunity in the same or another foreign
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,
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the same reason why they decided to study overseas in the first place.
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there might be disadvantages, I believe that there
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numerous advantages of studying abroad, but I will list only a few of them.
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, studying in another
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broaden
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the horizon because it teaches how to live on
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own, far from home.
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is mainly a personal positive development, but it is important because can have a positive impact on one’s life and in the professional career.
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, studying in a different
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even if is tough, teaches how to learn more than one thing at the same time: the
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and the topic.
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, often gaining a university degree in a foreign
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has more value than in one’s own
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. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because by
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experience overseas, we learn way more than remaining at home.
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