Some people think the best way to solve traffic congestion in cities is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hello, professor Pursur, my name is
faye
, I am student 25 on table 5. Today I would like to tell you a traditional Chinese fairy tale, which is called The Change the capitalization
Faye
Lotus
Lamp. Long long ago,There is
a beautiful goddess called the Wrong verb form
was
Sanshengmu
, fell
in love with a mortal, Liu Yanchang. She secretly went down to the mortal world and married him. They lived Correct pronoun usage
who fell
happy
life and had a lovely son named Add an article
a happy
Chenxiang
. But the happy life did not last
long, when Liu Yanchang went to Yangzhou to work as an official, Sanshengmu
was in trouble. Her elder brother, God
Er-lang
, was very angry with her marriage. "How can a goddess marry a mortal? I will take her back to Heaven!” Sanshengmu
had a very powerful lotus
lantern
that nobody could take her back by force. God
Er-lang
knew the power of the lotus
lantern
, so he ordered his dog to steal the lantern
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
put Sanshengmu
under Huashan Mountain. At the age of seven, Chenxiang
learned his mother's story from Correct pronoun usage
his neighbors
neighbors
. "Mom has been suffering so much! I must go there and rescue her!” “Change the spelling
neighbours
Chenxiang
, we are mortals. How can we fight against the gods?" his father sighed. Anyway, I will do my best to rescue my mom, "Correct your spelling
Chen Xiang
Chenxiang
said. One day, Chenxiang
left home for Huashan Mountain without letting his father know. Correct your spelling
Chen Xiang
Chenxiang
met a lot of difficulties on his way. He climbed over the snow- covered
mountains, walked across the endless desert, went through the ghost valley and was injured in the thornbushes... But none of these could stop him. A fairy named Correct your spelling
snow-covered
God
Thunderbolt was moved by the filial piety of Chenxiangs'
saving mother.Change noun form
Chenxiang's
God
Thunderbolt decided to help Chenxiang
and taught Chenxiang
all kinds of skills. Chenxiang
was very smart and hard-working. He made great progress. He finished his studies when he was sixteen. Correct your spelling
Chen Xiang
Then
he said goodbye to God
Thunderbolt and flew to Heaven to fight with God
Er-lang
. Through unremitting efforts, Chenxiang
defeated God
Er-lang
,
and got the Remove the comma
apply
lotus
lantern
back. After sixteen years Sanshengmu
finally
met her son. They held each other tightly. At this
moment the lotus
lantern
shined again. The world looked so bright and beautiful! From then
on, Chenxiang
and his parents lived happily together.Submitted by 范晨 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite