There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring your attention
on
issues with the Change preposition
to
bus
service is operated by The Transport Department. Over two weeks services are not on time and that outturn late on desired destinations.
As I said, the bus
service is responsible for my resign to being reached late at the office. The bus
driver is responsible for running the bus
30 minutes behind the schedule which end
to reached Change the verb form
ends
office
Correct article usage
the office
Change preposition
with 30
30 minute
delay and that affects my work performance.Another concern is that the seats are Add a hyphen
30-minute
also
torn in the bus
that cause
our clothes Change the verb form
causes
get
stained and which looks embarrassed.
I requestAdd the particle
to get
to
The Transport Department to take prompt action regarding my affair . So that, the problem we are facing will break down soon and people get satisfactory results reaching on time at Change preposition
apply
work place
Correct your spelling
workplace
also
help us to perform better. The seat should be replaced or repaired so that, our clothes remain spot free
.
I hope you take my complaint seriously and take strict actions to give us Add a hyphen
spot-free
better
solution and punctual on a daily schedule and in the future we will never face Correct article usage
a better
such
issues.
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
ABCCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite