There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..........., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to bring your attention
on
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issues with the
bus
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service is operated by The Transport Department. Over two weeks services are not on time and that outturn late on desired destinations. As I said, the
bus
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service is responsible for my resign to being reached late at the office. The
bus
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driver is responsible for running the
bus
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30 minutes behind the schedule which
end
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to reached
office
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the office
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30 minute
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delay and that affects my work performance.Another concern is that the seats are
also
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torn in the
bus
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that
cause
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our clothes
get
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stained and which looks embarrassed. I request
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apply
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The Transport Department to take prompt action regarding my affair . So that, the problem we are facing will break down soon and people get satisfactory results reaching on time at
work place
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help us to perform better. The seat should be replaced or repaired so that, our clothes remain
spot free
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. I hope you take my complaint seriously and take strict actions to give us
better
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solution and punctual on a daily schedule and in the future we will never face
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issues.
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faithfully, ABC
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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