You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback o this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you’ve done since the course suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to a recent cooking class that I had an opportunity to join at your vocational school. What made me enjoyed the beginner cooking class was the fun of meeting new people as well as a variety of new recipes that I could use
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to improve my family meals. I must say your class was impressive and the syllabus was prepared really well. After finishing the course, I am the one who has prepared lunch for my family for a whole month.
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have cooked perfect dishes on date nights, which surprises my honey because cooking her
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meals is an effective way to show how much I care about her. I think it would be better if you could open some specialized courses to help beginners know how to cook some popular cuisine,
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, Thai street food, Japanese cuisine, and vegetarian cuisine. Thank you very much for your attention; you can expect me to sign up for another cookery course sometime soon. Yours faithfully,
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