You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its headoffice in another country. Write a letter to your manager in your letter 1.Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months 2. Say how your work could be done while you are away. 3. Ask for his/her help in arranging it.

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Dear sir, I have been working for

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company for the

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few years as a senior software engineer. currently, I am looking to move to

head

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office division. It is located in the United States. I briefly explain in

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letter about my transfer. I have good experience in software and I am interested in working in logistics and admin control of applications but here we have only software development so I need to go there to upgrade myself to learn more certain things and the working period is just 6 months

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I will back to here for the work. I already organized Mr. Jacob (Senior soft engineer) and I informed him of everything about my project, he will work on that

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update you. I need a lot of support from you especially, in making some arrangements for my travel plan like tickets, visa, and appointment order.

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, please inform the concerned person who is in head office. Kindly send an official appointment letter to them which is more important. You will accept my work plan and I am looking for your valuable feedback Regards, Mark Antony

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Enhance logical connections between ideas for better flow.

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Breaking down some sentences for clear single idea per paragraph.

highlight for task achievement

The letter includes all the required information: reasons for the stay, arrangements while away, and a request for help.

highlight for suitable writing tone

The tone is formal and polite, suitable for a letter to a manager.

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Starts with an appropriate greeting and ends with a polite closing, maintaining professionalism throughout.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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