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If I want to think of a person whom I'm eager to meet and has been shown up on TV several times I would definitely say Megan from the royal family. Megan in terms of appearance is a Brunette with lovely complexion and some freckles on Her cheeks, I suppose. You know, since she became a part of the Royal family

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many news associated with their private life Has gone viral, a range of her family backgrounds and being a divorced woman to their latest decisions. As you might know the queen is so sensitive about royal movements and

also

detest gossip the most. But each time the news leaks out about

meghan

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Meghan

and harry and

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suppose

this

is the main reason why

meghan

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Meghan

isn't her favourite daughter_in_law. In some cases the queen is right,

meghan

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Meghan

has broken many laws. It's not odd to hear a news with

this

headline:"

meghan

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Meghan

has

sunken her

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sunken, her

biscuit in the royal tea party" but

on the other hand

, it's not hidden from anyone that every single decision of their personal life encounters the queen's dissatisfaction but will

finally

accede to their will. The latest news was about saying goodbye to the royal family and leaving their titles as duke and duchess behind. I must admit that it was devastating for everyone and not just the royal family. I mean, everyone dreams of living in the royal family without any responsibility or commitment to your occupation or coming across difficulties at work place if I had a chance to meet

meghan

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Meghan

I would definitely ask her about her ideology. All I'm trying to say is that it's much easier to be a coach potato and spend as much as you wish from an unlimited source, why would anyone rather have an ordinary life?

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

299 words

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