Some people think parents should read pr tell stories to children. Others think parents needn't do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are many
parents’s
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parents’
ways to take care of their children
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A half of them believe that parents should tell or read to children about different stories, others believe that parents should not involve in that as children have the
ability
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to understand and analyse those stories and lessons by themselves.
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, the grandparents
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tell their children stories and teach morals from them.
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is one of the best methods to help children grow perfectly.
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, we can see clearly that telling fairy tales to the children gives them many merits
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Although
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they can understand stories by reading themselves, they can not be up to the level as older people can. As they grow
up their
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up, their
analysing
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will increase.
Moreover
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, when the children hear the stories from their parents, they can feel family affection and attraction.
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, the grandparents
also
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tell them fairy tales and teach the morals from them.
This
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is one of the best
method
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methods
to help them improve
perfectly
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perfection
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, some parents don not need to do that because the children can read books or watch tv by themselves
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It is proved that these day’s children have the
ability
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to understand the situations and act according to that, they
not only read
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don't only read
stories but
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can teach to others. They think the children can be more independent
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of relying on
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them, but
in case of force majeure, the children will have no sense of mercy
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or
introduces an alternative
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example, in today’s schools, children who have just started
schooling
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school
can learn and involve in multiple tasks much faster than their parents. To sum up, though today’s children have the
ability
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to analyse situations and stories much better, it is always the responsibility of parents to look after on how well they understand it. It depends on each child, how good they analyse.
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