Some groups of people have benefited from modern communication technology but some people have not benefited at all. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays
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society is taking an advantage of holding the conversation with others because of an advancement. A new way of talking across the world amid humans
have
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has
appreciable
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however
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a few
segment
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segments
is still living
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are still living
far away from
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facility
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I agree with the statement that there are some untouched regions which are not enjoying
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new state of the art
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Firstly
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Masses who live in remote areas are not covered
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a giver or sender
from
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facility. Because Some
state's
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state
level opposite parties protest against central government policies to
dominant
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dominate
them in front of
public but
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public, but
It directly impacts the locals people facilities.
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a recent data published by Forbes in which mentioned that over than 40 African countries which are struggling for better connections amid mankind
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Apparently,
large part
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a large part
of the residents are not availing
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provision.
Secondly
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government
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the government
is focusing towards the big cities
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to villages.
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local administration
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the local administration
has provided many additional subsidies to the telecommunications organisation which gets the reward if they improve or install the service in metros only
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Therefore
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local authorities have not prioritised the interior areas
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for the reason that; on account of
because
they believe
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will get less profit
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recently Airtel
has refused
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refused
to set the network towers in Bihar because of small or non affordable customers
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Hence
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many challenges are there which
hesitates
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hesitate
the IT firms to provide the service for non approachable people
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In conclusion
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numbers of government and
corporates
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
policies have created an issue amid humans
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Thus
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other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
part is still suffering for the better conveyance
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