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Nowadays men sport is given far more attention in the society than women sport. What are the reasons? Do you think is it a positive or negative situation?

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There is no doubt that
society
 gives more important to men’s
sport
 as compared to women’s
sport
, and the reason behind
this
 is the best marketing
campaign
 for the men’s
sport
. In my opinion,
this
 is a negative trend as it adversely affects on women and the economy of the country. The best marketing
campaign
 is the predominant cause that men’s
sport
 acquires more attention from
society
 from women’s
sport
. To elucidate, it has been observed that often people prefer watching men’s
sport
, like cricket and football, either being at the stadium or home.
Hence
, the government and multinational companies tend to generate more revenue through endorsement and marketing
campaign
.
For example
, in 2017, the Indian Premier League, of men’s
sport
 received a budget of more than 100 million,
on the other hand
, despite winning the Cricket World Cup, the female’s sports team was unnoticeable to celebrate its achievement. Focusing more on men’s
sport
 and neglecting women’s
sport
 is a negative trend since it has a deleterious impact on women and
society
. Due to patriarchal nature often
society
 has not welcomed
this
 trend of playing women and think ideal woman is supposed to do housework, grow children and take care of the family.
Thus
, owing to lack of motivation, they are not able to depict their talent on the field. Irrefutably, there are many tournaments held all over the world for females. If women who are expert in any sports field do not get encouragement and enthusiasm, it will reduce their morale and eventually lose the output of the country by not getting the chance to participate in the tournament. In conclusion, heavy investment in a huge marketing
campaign
 is supporting reasons due to which male’s
sport
 obtains more focus from
society
. In my opinion,
this
 is a negative situation as not only it mitigates woman’s morale and enthusiasm, but
also
 the output of the country.
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